unforgotten maid

by Amir Maleki
(Tehran , Iran )

Actually he loved Maria but he couldn't express her idea fearing people made him fun. Maria was his family's maid .
Eventually he tell her mother what feeling he have about Maria. Although her mother was a polite woman, she start to tell him off. Then she angrily said :"you are going to burn up our family . Do you really know what you say ? I have to fire him right away ."
Next day he found out Maria wouldn't come . He looked all over for Maria . Days was unexciting and gloomy for him.
being far from Maria suffered him and made him weaker and weaker little by little.
His breaking down sent her mother into a rage . But he never see Maria once a more .

Here is my edited version:

Actually he loved Maria but he couldn't express his idea fearing people would make fun of him.
Maria was his family's maid.
Eventually he told his mother what feelings he had for Maria. Although his mother was a polite woman, she start to tell him off.
Then she angrily said, "You are going to burn up our family . Do you really know what you are saying? I have to fire her right away."
The next day he found out Maria wouldn't come to work. He looked all over for Maria . Days were unexciting and gloomy for him.
Being far from Maria, he suffered and this made him weaker and weaker little by little.
His breaking down sent her mother into a rage . But he never saw Maria again. Not even once.