Two Castles

by Gaelle

Here are two castles. They are really stunning, but castle n°2 is the nicest for me. In fact,
it is bigger than castle one and it is near a lake. Castle one, on the other hand, is higher
than castle two. It is on a mountain and has a better view than the other castle. From its
windows, you can have a view on a more pleasant scenery, where there are some mountains and a
lake. Castle number two has other positive elements in comparison with castle one. It has, for
example, many rooms, so it is more spacious and roomier than castle one. It has a lot of window,
so it is the brightest. However, it is also true that, because of its size, castle 2 can be less
cosy and more uncomfortable than castle one. Castle one is the smallest, but it is more pleasant
and warmer.


Here is my edited version:


Here are two castles. They are really stunning, but castle n°2 is the nicest for me. In fact, it is bigger than castle one and it is near a lake. Castle one, on the other hand, is higher than castle two. It is on a mountain and has a better view than the other castle. From its windows, you can have a view on more pleasant scenery, where there are some mountains and a lake. Castle number two has other positive elements in comparison with castle one. It has, for example, many rooms, so it is more spacious and roomier than castle one. It has a lot of windows, so it is the brightest. However, it is also true that, because of its size, castle 2 can be less cosy and more uncomfortable than castle one. Castle one is the smallest, but it is more pleasant and warmer.




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