The Fatty Gummy Guy

by Dina Fouli Ahmed
(Cairo, Nasr city, Egypt)

Before a long time, before the sun rises up, and after the night comes in, there was a boy called Peter. This boy was living a luxurious life. He was eating a lot of food especially gums. But all his friends were liked him so much because he was funny. Some of his friends called him by the name: the fatty Gummy Guy.

One day John "Peter's best friend" decided to make a small computation. He said to peter ,before starting the competition you should eat 20 pieces of strawberry gum to give you a magic power. By this way you will be the biggest winner.

Actually, John was cheating on peter because he hates him so much. The gums have a substance that decreases the blood flow to the brain and causes some muscles fatigue. In deed Peter was trustful for John and he ate all the gums.

Are you ready? You should run around the track 10 times without stopping. " the judge said" Poom......Poom the race was started"
Peter was running and running but suddenly he felt tired, he was going to die, his heart will be stopped in beating on and he cannot keep up with his friends.
Doctor...Doctor, we need some help her ".
At hospital Peter knew everything. He was mad of john and he decided to face him. Peter was banging on many things in the room and doctors tried to come him down.

NOK...NOK,
Yes who is on door?
I am john
Come in
Peter I know you are peeved from me. I am sorry, please forgive me.
why john, why you did it?
Because all the time you eat lot of gums and didn't give me any piece. So I decided to let you cut down eating gums.

Here is my edited version:

A long time ago, before the sun rose up, and after the night came in, there was a boy called Peter. This boy was living a luxurious life. He was eating a lot of food especially gums. But all his friends liked him so much because he was funny. Some of his friends called him by the name 'the fatty Gummy Guy'.

One day John, Peter's best friend, decided to make a small competition. He said to Peter, "Before starting the competition you should eat 20 pieces of strawberry gum to give you a magic power. This way you will be the biggest winner."

Actually, John was cheating on Peter because he hated him so much. The gums have a substance that decreases the blood flow to the brain and causes some muscle fatigue. Indeed Peter was trustful of John and he ate all the gums.

"Are you ready? You must run around the track 10 times without stopping. " the judge said" Poom......Poom," and the race was started.


Peter was running and running but suddenly he felt tired, like he was going to die, He thought his heart would stop beating on and he could not keep up with his friends.

Doctor...Doctor, we need some help here."

At the hospital Peter knew everything. He was mad at John and he decided to face him. Peter was banging on many things in the room and the doctors tried to calm him down.

KNOCK...KNOCK,
"Yes who is knocking on the door?"
"It's John."
"Come in."
"Peter I know you are peeved at me. I am sorry, please forgive me."
"Why John, why did you do it?"
"Because all the time you eat lots of gums and didn't give me any. So I decided to make you cut down on eating gums."