The Clinic Was Not Empty

by dina fouli ahmed
(cairo, nasr city,egypt)

Hi friends. My name is Dina. Ah Ah Idonot know where is my starting point. Ok, I will try to settle down all situations,because the last one was eneded up with disaster. let us start:

Robert was one of the most briallent biys who I met in my life. He was extroverted,concencious and perservering but he was ostanteious.
One day I was waiting him for 3 hours because we had a doctor appoinment. But something strange was happened.

Robert and me were in the clinic but it was empty, no doctors, no patients. We thought that we had been early. In deed we did not tunning in on the current situation untill appearance of something looks as a gost. robort started sceaming untill he losed his concious. I was banging up the gost by using many things to kill him, but it does not work.

Robert....Robert, wake up, please god help me, what can I do?

after a while some mommes appered. They tried to eat our brains as they done to doctors. I was fighting and fighting until...until I was eaten by Robert.

Here is my edited version:

Hi friends. My name is Dina. Ah Ah I don't know where to start. Ok, I will try to settle down, because the last time ended up with disaster.

Let us start: Robert was one of the most brilliant boys who I met in my life. He was extroverted, conscientious and persevering but he was ostentatious. One day I was waiting for him for 3 hours because we had a doctor appoinment. But something strange happened.

Robert and I were in the clinic but it was empty, no doctors, no patients. We thought that we were early.

Indeed we did not tune in on the current situation until the appearance of something that looked like a ghost. Robert started sceaming until he lost conciousness. I was banging up the ghost using many things to kill him, but it did not work.

Robert....Robert, wake up, please god help me, what can I do? After a while some mummies appeared. They tried to eat our brains as they did to the doctors. I was fighting and fighting until...until I was eaten

by Robert.