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by Raad
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I and my manager had been working on a new construction project. We believed in the necessity of that project to our town and the profits we will get it.
We agreed to arrange a presentation to introduce that project to our staffs and the people who are interested in. My manager advised me to stay away from any strange and complicated details and try to absorb any bad comment. He told me this is your chance to prove your skills to the management since every body looked down on you.
I cleaned out my self from the past painful enable me to be ready for that presentation.
Unfortunately, the manager was instructed to call off that presentation since it was costly and risky.


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My manager and I had been working on a new construction project. We believed in the necessity of that project to our town and the profits we would get from it.

We agreed to arrange a presentation to introduce that project to our staff and the people who
are interested in it. My manager advised me to stay away from any strange and complicated
details and try to deflect any bad comments. He told me, "This is your chance to prove your
skills to the management since every body looked down on you."

I cleaned out my painful past to be ready for that presentation.

Unfortunately, the manager was instructed to call off that presentation since it was costly and risky.




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Nov 08, 2009
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by: Anonymous

Hi, Raad!
It seems we both love writing. Good story.

Suela

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