poor family

by golesorkh
(Iran)

In the north of my land lived a poor family . the father have to work hard . he wanted to show off his family that he loves them so much . one of the night he was run down while he cameback home . the driver took him to the hospital , but he inured badly and he did not have enough money for hospital . then he passed away , he left behind his family while they donot have any soppurt for living .

Here is my edited version:


In the north of my land lived a poor family . The father had to work hard. He wanted to show his
family that he loved them so much.

One night he was run down while he came back home.

The driver took him to the hospital, but he was injured badly and he did not have enough money for the hospital. Then he passed away.

He left behind his family while they did not have any support for living.




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