Mistake
by Raad
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I finished the test quickly. I found that i goofed up on the test. I talked to my friend into finding a way to fix the problem. we agreed we went together to school and i accquaint him with the head of the school.We started talking to him in order to convince him to solve the problem. The head of the school goe angry and we tried to calm him down but we failed. fianlly , my friend backed off and left the office and leave me alone.
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I finished the test quickly. I realized after that I goofed up on the test. I talked my friend into helping me find a way to fix the problem. We agreed to go together to school where I accquainted him with the head of the school. We started talking to the head of the school in order to convince him to solve the problem. The head of the school got angry and we tried to calm him down but we failed. Finally , my friend backed off and left the office and left me alone.
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