Miss out to be hero

by Edie
(Bandung,Indonesia)

Several years ago, my teacher passed away leave behind a wife and 3 daughters. as a good father he gives advives to his children to be a good people and have responsibilities for every act and to be hero. But his young brother has not a good characteristic, he recognize me, every he meet me he never say hello and almost leave behind his friend meeting. One day his friend run down by a young man in a narrow aisle. he passed away in the place. Many people show the accident, and try together chase him by beccycles. But a young man rush by driving a motor car. Many people miss out to chase a young man. Several minutes a young man show off driving a motor car in a narrow aisle, he hit a big stone and he was screaming and die in place. All of people in the aisle miss out to be hero and may not show off ability handling run down for teanager in the narrow aisle.


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Several years ago, my teacher
passed away leaving behind a wife and three daughters. As a good father he advised his children to be good people and to be responsible for every act and to be heroes.

But his young brother had a poor characteristic: he recognized me every time he met me he but never said hello and almost left his friend behind after this meeting. One

day his friend was run down by a young man in a narrow street. He passed away there.

Many people saw the accident, and tried together to chase him on bicycles. But a young man rushed by driving a motor car. Many people missed out on the chance to

chase the young man. Several minutes later the young man showed off driving a motor car in a narrow street; he hit a big stone and he was screaming and he died there.

All of the people in the street missed out on the chance to be heroes and did not show off any ability at handling run down teanagers in the narrow street.