let me loose my heart

by pooja bose
(india)

shafat shah was a very crule rich man. he had 3 sons eldest was subhan & faizan & the youngest was ahsaan. 2 eldest were just like there father but ahsaan took the education from abrod so he was kind towards other people. because he was youngest he was a bit stuburn.the elder brothers did'nt like him & his tendar attitude thats why they always try to degrade him. after his parents died he wanted to get married with his classmate sumera but as always they refused his idea.then he left his house & went to the city there he marry with sumera & spned a happy life with her. after a year they had a beautiful doughter named meerab.she was very smart & genius.ahsaan & sumera's lives filled with joy & happienest.after very long when meerab was doing masters in english one day her couisn mehran came to her univeresty when he saw meerab he decided that he will marry her. hetried to prospse her but she does'nt like him so she tells her mother to tell him to stop bothering her. when she went to the universty to complain she found out that he is subhan's son.she came back to home & tells her husband about him he was very pleased to hear that his nefew is in the same city so he invited him at his residance.both uncle & nefew were very psyche to meet with each other.at the dinner time mehran proposed meerab.she got very angery & asked that what happened then when my father wanted to get marry with his classmate your family took him out from his house now from where you bring this fake love.after listining those words he was very embaressed & left there house but in the result of meerab's rudeness he killed his uncle & aunt & kidnaped meerab & kept her in the basement of his house. after 3 days her 2nd aunt zarmeena came to rescue her. she was very pleased & thankful to her & left the place as fast as possible. when mehran found out that meerab had been rescued he banged things up in anger & went out to find her. meerab was sitting in the train when dawar came.dawar was a good guy who found her alone so decided to ask her whats the matter. at first she hasitated to tell her story to a stranger but when she realized that he seems a nice guy she told him all her story. after listining her story he decided to help her. he brought her to his house at first she scared but when she met with dawar's grampa she took out the seigh of relief.she was spending quality time with them & she was very happy as well. after 2 months grampa decided to bound dawar & meerab in wedding knot.they were very glad in their new lives.one day meerab's family found out about her so her eldest uncle & aunt went to bring her back but she refused to go in the result mehran killed dawar too.dawar had a youngest brother saalar who was studing in england when he heared of his brother's death he returned from there.he was very upset on meerab he thought that just beacuse my brother helped this girl he had been killed.one day saalar's friend sarim came to his house when he saw meerab he started to like her when he found that she is dawar's widow he proposed her but saalar did'nt like that he bacame jealous. he told this situation to his grampa. he reveled to him that he is in love with the girl he hates the most.he denyed that but when he thought upon that he realiesed that his grampa was right. after one week police shot mehran for killing three people.subhan shah had a heartattack on his young son's death.when his wife saw her son's dead body & her husband's sudden attack she got insan.when faizan shah saw all this he & his wife zarmeena went to apolagize from meerab because of their cruelness towards her family.she forgives her whole family.then saalar proposed her she was shocked because saalar used to hate her & he acused her for his brothers death.but he conficed that in his hatred he lost his heart on her so she laughed & agreed with the proposel.after marrige they lived happiely for the rest of their lives.

Here is my edited version:

Shafat Shah was a very cruel, rich man. He had three sons.

The eldest was Subhan, next was Faizan and the youngest was Ahsaan. The two eldest were just like their father but

Ahsaan was educated abroad so he was kind to other people. Because he was youngest he was a bit stubborn. The

elder brothers didn't like him and his tender attitude. That was why they always tried to put him down. After his

parents died he wanted to get married with his classmate Sumera but as always his brothers refused.

Then he left his house and went to the city. There he got married with Sumera and spent a happy life with her.

One year after they were married, they had a beautiful daughter named Meerab. She was very smart. Ahsaan and

Sumera's lives were filled with joy and happiness.

Many years later, when Meerab was working on her masters in English one day her, cousin Mehran came to her

university. When he saw Meerab he decided that he wanted to marry her. He tried to propose to her but she didn't

like him, so she told her mother to tell him to stop bothering her.

When she went to the universty to complain she found out that he was Subhan's son. She went home and told her

husband about him. He was very pleased to hear that his nephew was in the same city so he invited him over. They

were both very psyched to meet with each other.

At dinner time Mehran proposed to Meerab. She got very angry and asked, "What happened then when my father wanted

to get married with his classmate and your family drove him out of his house, and now you come from there bringing

this fake love?"

After listening to those words he was very embarrassed and left their house but as a result of Meerab's rudeness

he came back and killed his uncle and aunt and kidnapped Meerab and kept her in the basement of his house.

After three days her second aunt Zarmeena came to rescue her. She was very pleased and thankful to her aunt and

left that place as fast as possible. When Mehran found out that Meerab had been rescued he banged things up in

anger and went out to find her.

Meerab was sitting in the train when Dawar came. Dawar was a good guy who found her alone so he decided to ask her

what was the matter. At first she hesitated to tell the story to a stranger but when she realized that he seemed

like a nice guy she told him the whole story. After listening to her story he decided to help her. He brought her

to his house. At first she scared but when she met with Dawar's grampa she breathed a sigh of relief. She spent

lots of quality time with them and she was very happy as well.

After two months grampa decided to bind Dawar and Meerab in wedlock. They were very happy in their new lives. One

day Meerab's family found out about her so her eldest uncle and aunt went to bring her back, but she refused to go

and as a result Mehran killed Dawar too.

Dawar had a youngest brother Saalar who was studying in England. When he heard of his brother's death he returned

immediately. He was very upset with Meerab. He thought that just because his brother helped this girl he had

been killed. One day Saalar's friend Sarim came to his house. When he saw Meerab he started to like her. When he

found that she was Dawar's widow he proposed to her but Saalar didn't like that and he became jealous.

He told this situation to his grampa. He revealed to him that he was in love with the girl he hated the most. He

denied it, but when he thought upon that he realised that his grampa was right. One week later the police shot

Mehran for killing three people. Subhan shah had a heart attack on hearing of his young son's death. When his

wife saw her son's dead body and her husband's she suddenly went insane. When Faizan Shah saw all this, he and

his wife Zarmeena went to apologize to Meerab for their cruelness towards her family. She forgave her whole

family. Then Saalar proposed to her and she was shocked because Saalar used to hate her and he blamed her for his

brother's death. But he confessed that in his hatred he lost his heart to her so she laughed and agreed with the

proposel. After the wedding they lived happily for the rest of their lives.