Homesick

by Raad
(Qatar)

I received an offer from CCC limited company. I read over that offer carefully and I sent my feedback. The company agreed with my feedback and sent back a revised offer.
It was a good offer and I could not turn it down .I decided to resign and turn my responsibilities over to my assistant.

I broke off my subscription in the activities and the fitness club subscription in my city.
I left my city headed to the new company in another city. The staffs welcomed me.
Apparently , The new position was not easy .I tried to prove my proficiency by working out all the suspected cases. By the course of the time, I felt homesick and made me sick . I was suffered from mental exhaustion .My health deteriorated rapidly. I threw up after eating every time .
Finally, I resigned and decided to go back to my city.

Here is my edited version:

I received an offer from a CCC limited company.
I read over that offer carefully and I sent my response. The company agreed with my feedback and sent back a revised offer.
It was a good offer and I could not turn it down. I decided to resign and turn my responsibilities over to my assistant.

I broke off my participation in the activities in my city and my membership in the fitness club.
I left my city and headed to the new company in another city. The staff welcomed me.
Apparently , the new position was not easy. I tried to prove my proficiency by working out all the suspected cases.
In the course of the time, I felt homesick and this made me sick . I suffered from mental exhaustion.
My health deteriorated rapidly. I threw up after eating every time .
Finally, I resigned and decided to go back to my city.