Don't Rush

by Raad
(Qatar)

I was in hurry. I packed up my office work quickly. I rushed out the office and I headed to a hyper market within the walking distant. I got in the market looking for a gift for my wife.
Looking for the suitable gift for my wife was very difficult, but in the end I decided to buy a very nice hand watch and i did.
I knew previously the market was ripped off me, but I had no choice all the shops near by were closed.
I tried to catch the bus but there were people queuing for the bus, so I decided to take a tax enable me to reach my home in time.
later,Unfortunately, my wife told me that the watch had not worked probably and i had to try it out before buying it. So I sent it back to the shop asking for replacement.

Here is my edited version:

I was in hurry. I packed up my office work quickly,rushed out the office and headed to a hyper market within walking distance. I got in the market and looked for a gift for my wife.
Looking for a suitable gift for my wife was very difficult, but in the end I decided to buy a very nice hand watch. ( and I did.)
I knew previously the market had ripped me off, but I had no choice since all the shops nearby were closed.

I tried to catch the bus but there were people queuing for the bus, so I decided to take a taxi so I could get home in time.
Later, unfortunately, my wife told me that the watch did not work and I should have tried it out before buying it. So I sent it back to the shop asking for a replacement.