Do not give up

by Raad
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We worked together since long time. we liked each other so, we decided to get married and start a new life. We showed to others that this marriage agreed with us , but in fact we were not happy . We started cheating on each other and we tuned in on the situation very soon .She started banging my stuffs up or give them away to others. These problems effected my work and kept me fell behind in my work. I laid off because all my customers stopped working with me and stopped rooting for my company. One day I decided to settle down this problem So, I decided to invite my wife to a dinner hopping to start a new page with her. While we were partaking of the feast ,I told her we both messed up and we had to own up to each other. Fortunately , she jumped at my invitation to forget the past and start a new life.

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We had worked together for a long time. We liked each other so, we decided to get married and start a new life. We showed others that this marriage agreed with us, but in fact we were not happy.

We started cheating on each other and we each tuned in to the situation quickly. She started banging my stuff up and giving them away to others. These problems affected my work and I fell behind in my work. I was laid off because all my customers stopped working with me and stopped rooting for my company.

One day I decided to settle this problem so,I decided to invite my wife to a dinner hoping to start a new page with her. While we were partaking of the feast, I told her we both messed up and we had to own up to each other. Fortunately, she jumped at my invitation to forget the past and start a new life.