Do not follow suit Marry

by Raad
(Qatar)

Marry was in a trading exhibition represents Acon company. Actually she was very talent and she managed to convince one client to make a deal with her company . As the result of this understanding, she invited her client to a restaurant . while they partaking in together, Marry requested to consider a commission for her in the upcoming agreement. The client was upset . she tuned in on the situation very quickly. She realized that she had missed up , however, the client was very quite and root for her company and he was very sad for a such tricky girl work in this company .So he decided to inform her manager to give a lesson to marry.
Marry owned up to the mistake in front of the staffs of the company. Marry layed off
Since Marry has noting to do in the company .


Here is my edited version:

Mary was in a trading exhibition representing the Acon company. Actually she was very talented and she managed to convince one client to make a deal with her company.

As a result of this agreement, she invited her client to a restaurant. While they were partaking of the feast together, Mary requested her client to consider a commission for her in the upcoming agreement.

The client was upset. She tuned in on the situation very quickly. She realized that she had messed up, however, the client was very quiet and rooted for her company. He was very sad that such a tricky girl worked in this company. So he decided to inform her manager to teach a lesson to Mary.

Marry owned up to the mistake in front of the staffs of the company. Mary was laid off.
Since then, Marry has had nothing to do with the company .