Always Try It Out
by Raad
(Qatar)
This Friday I packed up my work early in order to catch the bus to London. I reached the bus station , I saw people queuing up . Actually the bus delayed two hours and people had been waiting for more than two hours. I realized that waiting in that queue was wasting of time so , I headed to a small shop bear by and bought an electronic toy for my son.Then I went back to the bus station and I caught the bus to Pool and I reached my home. When I checked the bill, I found that I was ripped off . moreover, the toy did work properly. Actually , it was my mistake because I had to tried it out before buying it. I called the shop and they advised me to send it back for the replacement.
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This Friday I packed up my work early in order to catch the bus to London. When I reached the bus station, I saw people queuing up . Actually the bus was delayed for two hours and people had been waiting for more than two hours.
I realized that waiting in that queue was a waste of time, so I headed to a small shop nearby and bought an electronic toy for my son. Then I went back to the bus station and I caught the bus to Pool and I reached my home.
When I checked the bill, I found that I had been ripped off. Moreover, the toy did not work properly. Actually, it was my mistake because I had not tried it out before buying it. I called the shop and they advised me to send it back for the replacement.
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