Accident

by Ali
(Pakistan)

I was riding on a motorbike, while going on a trip, suddenly i saw a motorcar it was coming to me. I fell head long. And i become unconscious, when i came in sense i found myself in Hospital. i thanks God for all

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I was riding on a motorbike, while going on a trip. Suddenly I saw a motorcar. It was coming at me. I fell head long and I became unconscious. When I came to my senses, I found myself in a hospital. I thanked God for all.


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