A Scared Cave

by sano
( AL AIN)

once upon a time i went on a trip with my family .I went to a beautiful island I enjoyed a lot ,but when there were a lot of problems I lost my money and I went to search for it but I lost my way and I found a great cave

Here is my edited version:

Once upon a time I went on a trip with my family.
I went to a beautiful island which I enjoyed a lot, but when there were a lot of problems I
lost my money and I went to search for it but I lost my way and I found a great cave.